Er…55 Tag?

2009 March 29
by Sahaja

Picked this up from Solilo and Dhiren’s blog!

Well, in this case, its not actually fiction, but could well be! So do not know if it qualifies, but thought I would post it :)

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He : Don’t try to hold air in your palms…..Its just escapes through the finest gap it finds!!

Me: (to my own and his surprise) : I am not trying to hold air , I am breathing it through….it cant escape anywhere……its within me, a part of me!!!

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A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)

A setting,

One or more characters,

Some conflict, and

A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

10 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 March 29

    Very nice, Sahaja! Is this a 55 word science lesson? :)
    Yup Yup, Science, love, life all in one :P

  2. 2009 March 29

    Et tu Sahaja :)
    That’s literature after Science :)
    thanq IHM :D …hehe ya :) its addictive isnt it?

  3. 2009 March 29

    Good one :)
    philosophy and life :) and science too :)
    hehe Ya , I didnt realise :P

  4. 2009 March 30

    Nice one Sahaja :-) I think you have already posted this one with whole conversation, right na? its really worth another read :-)
    ya Kanagu, its a conversation between me and my friend :) thank you so much :D

  5. 2009 March 30

    interesting !
    Hmm….lemme know ur thoughts, I have written it in a way and each of my readers interpreted in their way! Its very interesting indeed :)

  6. 2009 March 30

    Nice one, Sahaja! Really nice!
    Thank you Smitha :D :)

  7. 2009 March 31

    i felt he is saying your clutching things too hard… let go…

    and you are like telling him, no… they aer a part of me… sort of…

    not entirely sure…

  8. 2009 April 1
    rajturl permalink

    aah back to ur blog aft very long.. :)
    i love the abstract philosophies..esp wen the meaning isn’t spot on :)
    oh btw are u ramya harika on facebook? ok try leaving mes on my blog..

  9. 2009 April 3

    yup I am :)

  10. 2009 April 6
    renuka permalink

    i know what u mean…liked it

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